ext_302089 ([identity profile] dork-nerd.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] liralen 2009-02-22 01:45 am (UTC)

Yay! A new chapter!
Again, wonderful writing. I loved the conversation during the moon-viewing. Very witty dialogue that had me laughing... "Brother, you've taught us all the folly of expecting anything from you." :)
I also enjoyed the moment in the gallery. You do such a great job of giving the characters depth in unique and original ways but still keeping them true to their representation in the manga.
I noticed that you posted in the shun_uki community. I hope you get more readers because of it! I will continue to stalk your index page. I can't wait to 'met' Ukitake's family. I'm certain it will be an interesting juxtaposition with these last couple of chapters.
Thanks for sharing your great story!

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