I adore how you wrote Rangiku in this; you've captured her deeper side perfectly, and you've shown it in a way that's quintessentially her (with the shopping and squeeing). I think you worked it brilliantly.

Also, I loved the overall tone of this piece, and there were so many gorgeous lines and details, like this: deep russet scarf that fluttered in every breeze, and a blush as hot as a mid-summer day. - Just beautiful!