I loved this! Every few seconds while I was reading, some detail or another just pinged me as absolutely perfect. From Renji being awkward on ice skates to the image of Nanao drawing on the ice to the use of zanpakutou to create ice fields or lights in the trees... Yummy, all of it.
I also liked the feeling of controlled, deliberate readiness as the alert went out. It came across as them being very professional, and that was a rare treat to see.
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Date: 2009-12-22 11:40 am (UTC)I also liked the feeling of controlled, deliberate readiness as the alert went out. It came across as them being very professional, and that was a rare treat to see.