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Try to write different categories of fic (angst, fluff, UST, romance...can you think of others?) in 10 words or less.

This is my try using the Twin Souls Jyuushiro and Shunsui from Bleach. Disclaimer thingy: I don't own or make money off of Bleach. At all.



Angst
"We'll die doing this, Jyuushiro."

"They die if we don't."

Fluff
"Come to bed."

"After this kido spell..."

"Jyuushiro..."

"Oh... Shunsui..."

Humor
"A poem for me?"

"Who else?"

"Rina-chan, Unohana-sempai, Kuchiki Kaoru..."

Hurt/Comfort
Shunsui's embrace was a lung remedy like none other.

UST
The waterfall poured over Shunsui's lean strength, caressing brown skin.

Adventure
"On three..."

"Shunsui, this is such a stupid plan."

"Three."

Smut
Jyuushiro arched against those fighting calloused, but gentle poet's hands.

AU or Crossover
Shunsui pressed Jyuushiro back against the bookshelves, "Nice honeymoon suite."

Romance
different bodies same mind
two blades one heart


異体同心 itaidōshin (i different + tai body + dō same + shin mind)
though, really, I would have thought that last character was "heart", not mind...

"On three..."

Date: 2009-01-12 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com
Adventure and UST ones are the best! :D

Re: "On three..."

Date: 2009-01-12 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
*laughs* I'm glad you liked them! Hee.

Date: 2009-01-12 08:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hidden-gems.livejournal.com
*happy happy sigh*

Nothing like some good ShunUki stuff in the morning <3

Date: 2009-01-12 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
Thank you! *beams*

I love your icon, too. *grins*

Date: 2009-01-12 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hidden-gems.livejournal.com
Thanks! A couple of friends and I squee-ed our hearts out when we found that picture and then proceeded to feel very cheated that the particular ending was never aired because of the promotion for the 1st movie =(

Date: 2009-01-12 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
Awwwww... that *is* sad.

Date: 2009-01-12 09:55 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] incandescens
And now I'm imagining them being scolded out of a library for making too much noise. :)

Date: 2009-01-12 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
*giggles* Though... I was thinking of it being the AU where that two-page spread comes true. *laughs* The sad inability of just ten words to invoke the full context within the author's mind. *laughs*

But, yes. I can just imagine *that* too.

Date: 2009-01-12 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophiap.livejournal.com
Oh, these are very nice indeed. I love how you write those two.

Date: 2009-01-12 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-01-12 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodthirstylt.livejournal.com
So very lovely!

Date: 2009-01-12 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-01-12 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evan-malfoy.livejournal.com
So I'm totally imagining that the AU is the continuation of the colour spread from the manga, amirite? XD

And really, don't feel limited to ten words... I'm always a fan of interesting situations being explored, particularly when they involve Jyuushirou and Shunsui, and even moreso when it also involves sex. ftw.

I also really like the angst, UST, and adventure. My brain is now trying to imagine the epic tales that would contain these lines, and pretty much failing. I kind of want to blame this on the fact that my brain keeps derailing into smut, but it is also that I just kind of suck at that sort of thing. Oh well! This is why you write and I comment. >_>

Date: 2009-01-12 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
You are entirely right. *grins*

Hee. In this case it was supposed to be a quick exercise... so I wanted to limit myself a bit... turns out to be a bit like prose haiku, every word counts.

Hee. I'll keep writing then! Thank you!!

Date: 2009-01-14 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annieroo2.livejournal.com
Oh these were just beautiful! Humor & Adventure were my favorites though! :D

Date: 2009-01-14 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
Thank you! They felt a bit like prose haiku. goodness...

:-)

Date: 2009-01-30 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] day-eight.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. All of these are awesome. AU and Romance are my favorites. Romance especially. Just... wow.

I might have to steal this from you. =D

Totally had to go back and look to see if you'd written anything recently. I forgot that I only had you friended with my writing journal. I check my f-list with my personal journal.

Date: 2009-01-30 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
Mmm... glad you like the Romance one. I love Shunsui when he comes out with poetry as I can't write it to save my life. *laughs*

You should!! I'd love to see you do these, they're a bit like prose haiku...

And to make it easy... this is my fanfic tag (http://liralen.livejournal.com/tag/fanfic). I haven't written that much Uki/Shun lately, but there was "Baby it's Cold Outside"... *laughs* I'm now burying myself in *just* Twin Souls so that, maybe, I can finish it. Whew.

Date: 2010-11-04 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
So many genres, so many kinds of awesome. I apologize in advance if I'm unable to react to anything due to how much I'm squeeing over here. These are all brilliant.
-Maya.

Date: 2010-11-04 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
*beams* I love that you left the squeeing breadcrumbs. *laughs*

That's lovely enough. Thank you!

How absolutely adorable!!

Date: 2013-09-03 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfkura.livejournal.com
These are awesomely cute~~!! =)
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"異体同心 itaidōshin (i different + tai body + dō same + shin mind)
though, really, I would have thought that last character was "heart", not mind..."
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I don't speak Japanese, but I do speak Mandarin. I know for us, the character 心 can refer to both the heart and the mind. A lot of words that are used for thinking or thought have the character 心 in it, so.... what you wrote actually makes perfect sense to me =).

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